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Tuesday, 2 July 2019
Savanah Mr Streptococcus WANTED poster
This is my Streptococcus WANTED poster, this post is about a germ wanted poster that will be placed around our school to give kids a warning of this germ going around.
Hi Savannah I love your work it is very creative and different. It was a great idea to do this and your drawing is amazing. You are also a great writer.It is great that you showed how not to get sick and it was very helpful to me because I don't want to be sick thanks Rylee Kumara School
Hi Savannah it is important to know that MR Streptococcus can be found in your hands if you do not wash them. I also like how you made him. I can not believe that it could lead to heart problems. Every one please wash your hands before eating.
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Hi Savannah I love your work it is very creative and different. It was a great idea to do this and your drawing is amazing. You are also a great writer.It is great that you showed how not to get sick and it was very helpful to me because I don't want to be sick
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Rylee Kumara School
Hi Savannah it is important to know that MR Streptococcus can be found in your hands if you do not wash them. I also like how you made him. I can not believe that it could lead to heart problems. Every one please wash your hands before eating.
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