I am a student Te Hapara School, Gisborne. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave a comment.
Monday, 9 September 2019
My speech
This is my Speech, I am still figuring out how to make this bigger so it's easier to read it, once I know how to do it, I will edit and fix it.
either way, I hope you like it!
Hi Savannah I really like your speech it reminds me of my friends speech (and of my siblings!) That's one of the best speeches i've ever heard! well done! from Abby
Hi Abby! Thank You for your thoughtful, positive comment. I'm really glad that my speech reminds you of something! Fun Fact, I actually presented my speech today in class. Also I am SO happy that you thought my speech were one of the best you have heard!
Kia ora Savannah! When you talk about your younger sister I realised how annoying my little sister is! I really like the reasons you gave me. I think my sister is part of a alien society too. Next time could you tell me the name of the alien society??
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Savannah
ReplyDeleteI really like your speech it reminds me of my friends speech (and of my siblings!) That's one of the best speeches i've ever heard!
well done!
from Abby
Hi Abby!
DeleteThank You for your thoughtful, positive comment. I'm really glad that my speech reminds you of something! Fun Fact, I actually presented my speech today in class. Also I am SO happy that you thought my speech were one of the best you have heard!
hi savannah your speech look like a lot of work keep it up.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Savannah! When you talk about your younger sister I realised how annoying my little sister is! I really like the reasons you gave me. I think my sister is part of a alien society too. Next time could you tell me the name of the alien society??
ReplyDeleteSincerely Nikita
aloha savanna what an amazing speech you have created i to have a little brother from the secret socity of aliens
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